Monday, May 7, 2007

To Begin with...my recent scribble...

One day in the twilights...
Many have been chilling out with friends

One guy was having shuftis at gals
Who walked alongside...
While chatting with his friends...

All of a sudden, he was unable to stop staring at a belle...
Sorry she isn't a belle(its tooo old to use) rather...
She is a pretty lassie!!!

Its not that she was in a glistening or exotic attire but
She on a whole was exceedingly exotic...

He has been looking the lass for two years...
But at that instant...
It seemed he was staring at VENUS...
The GODDESS of beauty!!!???

In fact it wasn't only he
Who was staring at her...
But many guys were!

He felt like he has been
Mesmerized by her radiance...
He was simply awe-struck by her elegance...

He seemed to be under
The magical spell of her pulchritude...
He was so enchanted by her beauty that...
He couldn't hold himself...

This might be a common cinematic scenario but...Inspired by John Keats
It's just an
encomium...but not an eulogy...sounds ridiculous???



3 comments:

Shubhankar said...

Nope...doesn't sound ridiculous by any means...A very good first attempt at blogging..!! :-)
But hey...do pass on the name & address of this venus to me..!!! ;P

Anonymous said...

dey ..its really obvious of whom u r talkin about...

Miriyala Aravind said...

Arey mari hi-fi words upayoginchavu emo!
Anyhow readable